Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'.  How true do you think this statement is?  What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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of cars are increasing in several cities of the world in the
last
three decades which is a major cause of
traffic
jam issues.
However
,
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believe that
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it can be
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awful condition for all
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humans. Steps which should
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by
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the government
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to reduce
this problems
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these problems
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are mentioned in
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paragraphs. Nowadays,
population
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the population
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is rapidly increasing in several countries.
Therefore
, the number of
four wheelers
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are
also
rising. In many homes, every people have
their
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separate 4-wheel.
In addition
, due to
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their time citizen afford to travel with their own vehicle
instead
of public transports. Because of that reason in rush hours like morning and evening people are suffering
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long distances
traffic
jams.
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contrary
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, to solve
this
problem government should take steps in
positive
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way. There are several ways for government to reduce
this
problem.
Firstly
, they should decide
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limit of cars for each family.
For example
, each family can purchase only 1or 2 cars so, because of
this
number of
automobile
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will decrease and pollution as well.
Secondly
, public transportation should be free in
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the city
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area. If there are no charges on public transport ,so it can be a reason to influence people to travel in buses and trains which can be a major factor to decrease
traffic
issues. In conclusion,
traffic
issue is a controversial issue for all among the world but mentioned measure can be beneficial to reduce it.
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