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some people feel that entertainers are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of job should be highly paid?

#people #entertainers #money #job
Nowadays, artists are receiving
highest
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 paid for their talents and performances, but come to think of it that some of them were just shown
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 the television for just 3 minutes of advertisement and it is done, they will be paid with too much money for that. In my view, some examples of
career
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 that should receive high income are those people who are working under pressure
such
 as, policemen, skilled
workers
,
fire fighters
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,
health related
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health-related
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 jobs,
workers
 on the streets(street sweepers, garbage collectors).
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,
under skilled
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under-skilled
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workers
 were construction
workers
, they are working so hard to erect a building under the heat of the sun or
a
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very cold weather to meet their deadline and for sure they are just receiving a minimum wage.
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, in the field of
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 jobs, nurses in some countries are being underpaid. The work of a nurse is very
nobel
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noble
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 profession, as I can see how they dedicate their time and passion to their patients, working simultaneously in a
12 hour
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 shift, carrying out the
doctors
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 order, giving correct medications to correct patients, standing long hours for a procedure and maintaining safety and comfort to patients. In conclusion, artists should receive
salary
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a salary
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 according to the job they
posses
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 because some of the entertainers or public figures are just showing bad influence to the public and it is not a good example to the young generations, because they are thinking that when they saw something or any act displayed in the TV
that is
 correct. So, better paid high salary to those who are working very hard for their family, for the government, for the institutions and whichever they are working.
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