Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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With the 21st century having importance of science and technology, there is
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discussion about whether students in university should be better to choose
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related to science. I believe giving the right of choice to students is more important. On the one hand, some
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argue that every student in college should learn some
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which would be useful in future. In fact, the industries
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as engineering, medicine have advanced continuously. So,it is necessary for surviving in stiff competition. Having an ability and acquiring knowledge about these
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would offer
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opportunities, career progression and better salaries. and it would lead to a life of good quality.On the societal level, countries can nurture talented young
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who have inherent ingenuity, which would bring benefits
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as developing new invents.
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, the country’s economy would grow up.
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, young
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in university should be free to choose their major. It would be the
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gateway to decide directions where they go in their lives. Most workers work a
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related to their major.Again, there is a high possibility that the major would be their
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in their lifetime. If they just make a choice which is forced by society, they might live depressing life.
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, if they have the freedom which can choose what they desire, they would work passionately and enjoy and concentrate on their
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. From the social point, it would make a healthier and ideal society.
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, as forming various kinds of professionals, all areas evenly would develop in future. In conclusion,
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it might be reasonable to focus on prospective
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which is useful in future, I personally prefer that
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have the right to study whatever they want.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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