In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is a common practice in Britain and other European countries that when people grow old and are not able to take
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of themselves, they get enrolled into old age homes nearby. On most ,occasions families take
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of the bills
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sometimes government pays. I think it is an option not to be
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on who has to pay because that totally depends on the family. I will explain some situations of when
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can or cannot take
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responsibility. If we take a wider look most people in Britain live in nuclear families and have two or more
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. In a situation of an early marriage offsprings usually are matured when their
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get old and most
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work part-time while doing their graduate studies. In an environment where
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taught to live independently without interfering with their working
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they tend to be more responsible. Some of these qualities make them feel accountable for everything happening in their family. They
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feel the need to take
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of their
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like they were taken
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of. In
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bills or payments to organisations looking after their
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can be taken
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of
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family members. There are
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who have been raised by
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single parent or cohabiting
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. It is a well-known fact that a child needs to be raised in a healthy environment where it is loved and nourished by everyone around.
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are spoilt and become vulnerable when they are exposed to bad behaviours
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as harassment. They do not understand the concept of love and affection. They become irresponsible, lack confidence, feel insecure and sometimes even question their own existence. In
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cases when
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are devoid of their own well being it is impossible to expect them to take
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of their
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and pay for them.
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is when the government has to help the elderly by funding the old age homes to take
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of them. To conclude, a person who is emotionally attached to his family and has a good heart will always thrive towards helping the family members in all ways.
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, someone with the opposite can never be depended upon.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Aging population
  • Elderly care
  • Nursing homes
  • Social welfare
  • Intergenerational responsibility
  • Caregiving
  • Financial burden
  • Quality of life
  • Pension funds
  • Healthcare policy
  • Taxation
  • Subsidies
  • Private insurance
  • Long-term care
  • Sustainability
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