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In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employ-ment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In many parts of the world today there are many highly qualified young graduates out of
work
.
This
 unfortunate situation has been increased by the fact that to get a job you need a school qualification for which you need many years of study, in
this
 way the age of the workers rises, and the independence of the children becomes more and more distant.
For example
, in
Italy
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 many medical students at the end of their studies must go to look for
work
 abroad as it is very difficult to find
work
 in our country. Most jobs nowadays require a degree
although
 not all people are good for it, society requires a "sheet of paper" to be able to
work
 when it is more difficult to obtain it than to do the job itself. Another important problem is that of public competitions in which there are few places available and many in demand.
For example
, to
work
 in the world of education after the obligatory course of study, after university and specialization, after the qualification to teach you must take public courses obtaining "credits" for
a
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apply
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graduation where objectively the more you are older, they are high as there is no opportunity for young people to do experience and there are n
ot
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not
 enough resources for
such
 an important but sacrificed sector. To conclude, I believe that the basis of
this
 problem is the organization of
this
 society where it is thought that young people do not want to
work
 when
,
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 they are not given the opportunities to do so.
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