It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Travel
has always been perceived as a good approach to traditional customs and exotic Use synonyms
culture
of other countries. Use synonyms
However
, nowadays, some Linking Words
people
begin to hold Use synonyms
such
a perspective that we should avoid a wide variety of travels aimed at learning about Linking Words
culture
since reading books and watching films have provided us with enough information on cultural traditions in other Use synonyms
places
. I think that overall, I disagree with the view.
As reasonable it may seem, compared with travels, the flexibility and convenience of the references, videos and websites related to traditional Use synonyms
culture
are apparent. Use synonyms
In particular
, thanks to today’s advanced Internet technologies, we can not only acquire E-books and documentaries with rich contents but Linking Words
also
adjust the peace of our studying plans to our own needs, just needing an Internet-connected device Linking Words
such
as a smartphone or laptop. It appears that some mass Linking Words
medias
can make us get a higher degree of autonomy than travels.
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media
Nevertheless
, it seems unwise to underestimate travels’ contributions to the spread and education of traditional Linking Words
culture
, after all, as an activity needing human beings’ active participation, Use synonyms
travel
allows us to maintain close contact with Use synonyms
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exotic Add an article
a various
culture
far away from the Use synonyms
places
where we are living, which will help us get a deeper understanding of the local Use synonyms
culture
. It is not rare Use synonyms
see
in some areas that the local authorities in these Add the particle
to see
places
would frequently hold cultural events that introduce many local cultural heritages and that would be aimed at attracting more tourists. Through these events, these Use synonyms
people
can gain a huge amount of knowledge about local Use synonyms
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culture
, Change the noun form
cultures
such
as folk music and dances.
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In addition
, Linking Words
travel
boosts cultural communication in a more active way than books or videos. During Use synonyms
travel
, we can actively interact with local Use synonyms
people
and deeply experience their life, Use synonyms
such
as their dietary habit, peculiar customs and unique manners, while transmitting our own Linking Words
culture
to those local Use synonyms
people
in the process of mutual exchanges. Obviously, it is not that easy for mass media to achieve Use synonyms
such
a direct and effective interaction.
To summarize, Linking Words
although
some mass media play a necessary role in cultural exchange, Linking Words
traveling
is of greater importance in order for us to personally experience the distinctive cultures and customs from different Change the spelling
travelling
places
.Use synonyms
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