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Some think that climate change reform will negatively affect business. Others feel they are an opportunity for businesses. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, a wide range of compliances
have
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 been imposed on the businessman to protect the
environment
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.
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 it is claimed by some people that these deterrents will put adverse influences on the
business
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, other individuals believe that transformations of
business
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 for saving the ecosystem will help to grow the
business
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.
This
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 essay will argue how businessman will get a fresh path to accelerate their industry despite having many adverse impacts. In my opinion,
industries
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 will get more chances to extend their
busienss
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business
.
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 with, companies are operating their
business
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 upon complying
strict
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 rules and regulations in order to protect the earth from
climate
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change
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, since the government and authorities are imposing many restrictions and barriers to
save
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 the ecosystem,
industries
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 are facing a strenuous and hostile
business
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environment
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.
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, corporate
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taxpayers
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tax payers
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taxpayers
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 of Bangladesh have to set aside a myriad amount for green finance fund,
total
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a total
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ten
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percent
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per cent
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 of their
profit
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. Undoubtedly,
this
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 type of
environment
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 conservation related funds are not only reducing the
profit
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 of the organization but
also
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 creating
an
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extra pressure on the financial condition.
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,
transformation
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the transformation
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 of
climate
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change
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 is adversely affecting the
industries
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.
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, reformation initiatives of
climate
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change
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 have
also
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widening
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 the horizon of the
business
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. To elaborate, as new
business
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 ideas and fresh forms of products have been introduced, the
industries
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 are now able to expand their
business
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.
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,
growth
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the growth
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as well as
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, as well as profit of these industries,
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profit
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a profit
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 of these
industries
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has
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 been increasing.
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, due to the rise of bio-degradable bags,
jute
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the jute
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 product manufacturing
industries
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 of Bangladesh are now producing
environment
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-friendly bags, which augmented their profits. Many
industries
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 are,
therefore
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, able to get new opportunities with the rise of awareness related to
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environment
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environmental
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 protection In conclusion, many
industries
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 have grabbed the opportunity to accelerate their
business
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 in the era of
climate
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change
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 despite many newly imposed rules and regulations. In my opinion, transformations of
business
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 due to
climate
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change
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 have provided
the
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apply
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companies with more ways to expand their
business
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 and amplify their
profit
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.

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