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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In each stage of
life
, the role that
people
 tend to play differs. Some
people
 argue that the happiest
time
 in most human being’s
life
are
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 when they are teenagers, whereas others believe that adult
life
 is happier, despite the fact that
adults
 are more responsible for many aspects.
This
 essay will discuss those views and explain why I think being a teenager is a lot more fun and pleasure. No one can argue that children have less accountability for many aspects. Generally speaking, they are not required to work to look after a family. If being forced to say, their job is to attend school, learn fundamental
life
 skills and gain invaluable knowledge, which, to me, is the most precious
time
 in
life
 as when they get older, they will be in
more
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 hectic
life
 with heavier responsibility,
such
 as parenting. Once they become a parent,
time
 restriction and financial concerns take place in
life
 in order to raise a child healthy. As
people
 rightly said, “It takes a village to raise a child”, without a doubt, the older
people
 get the harder their
life
 will be because of that perspective.
Conversely
, there is some bright side of being an adult which can be argued that it is much happier, compared to the
life
 in teenage
time
.
Adults
 are expected to be in
workforce
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 in general,
thus
 they earn money, which means more financial freedom to some extent. It is evident that teenagers attend school
everyday
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. Some youth work in their spare
time
 but do not earn as much as
adults
 do. From that point of view, older
people
 have more financial freedom and spend their money on whatever they need. That said, there is again, accountability for majors to utilize their finance responsibly if they have children or aspirations to achieve their
life
 goals. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that
although
adults
 can possibly earn a lot more than teenagers so that they are enabled to purchase things they need easily, the opportunity that
school aged
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 minors have for
acquisition
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the acquisition
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 of knowledge and skills are far more paramount and invaluable.
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