Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce poverty in the world. Others say that economic growth should be stopped as it damages the environment. Discuss both views.

Economic sustainability is the most demanding factor to minimize the problem of unemployment. People are divided on the basis of

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view point

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, some are in favour

with

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this

statement and others believe that it is totally detrimental

for

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the ecosystem. In

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essay , I will discuss both perspectives along with suitable examples.

To begin

with,those individuals who agree with

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point

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gives their views as follows.

Firstly

,

economic

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the economic

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boom acts as a boon for those youngsters who are struggling for finding jobs, as we all know that

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advancement needs manual

work

for its business growth.

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,

last

year ,

mining

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project was set up in

Uttra

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Uttar

Pradesh and it generated thousands of

work

opportunities for peoples who

didnot

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did not

didn't

have any small

work

for meeting their both ends.

Secondly

, improvement in

economy

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leads to the advent of many useful alternatives of valuable products

such

as fossil fuels that are present in scarcity. To exemplify, due to leap and bound progress in technology, makes it possible to run modes of transportation on electricity and it is very helpful to conserve

huge

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amount of coal , petrol and diesel for the upcoming generations.

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, it provides immense benefits to

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human beings. On the opposite side , there are some negatives why some group of society think that financial development should be prohibited. The primary one is that

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it affects the environment , because projects like thermal plants and refineries

emits

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harmful gases into the atmosphere as well as in water,

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not only the reason for global warming

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but

also

cause dangerous diseases like asthma and heart problems. The secondary one is that

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it may

also

harmful for marine habitat, as during sea mining there are the chances of leakage in between the process and sometimes

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can be the reason

of

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blast.

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, in the year 2015, there was

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disaster in Das Island which is located in Abudhabi and around the geographical range of 100

kilometers

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kilometres

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, all the aquatic animals are affected and

this

also

polluted the pure liquid.Thence,

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proved

as

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a

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lethal for mankind and for animals. To conclude,

although

progress in

economy

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the economy

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is considered as

a

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advantage for

whole

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the whole

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world

,

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because it provides

work

and energy sources ,

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it put

adverse

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an adverse

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impact on

atmosphere

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the atmosphere

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and on the lifestyle of dwellers.