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The bar chart provides information about the main export items in Southland in the year 2000, 2010 and 2025. Overall, as can be clearly seen from the graph, international tourism experienced an increase in their numbers, while meat

products

showed a downward trend.

Moreover

, dairy

products

had some fluctuation during the years. In 2000, the number of international tourism started with just over 8

billion

, which was the highest in all three

products

This

increased gradually to nearly 9 in 2010 and jumped to a peak of just under 10 in the final year.

In addition

to Dairy

products

, it started with about 7 in 2000.

Then

it rose sharply to approximately 10

billion

in 2010, which was about 5

billion

more than international tourism.

Finally

, the rate dropped 5 in 2025. In regards to Meat

products

this

was the least popular product in the whole period. It began with 6 in 2000 and

then

it fall steadily to 5,5 and reached 5

billion

in the

last

year.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

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168 words

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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