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The below shows the amount of time that 10 to 15-year-olds spend ‎chatting on the Internet and playing on games consoles on an average school ‎day in the UK.‎

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The(1) given bar graph (2)compares to time spent chatting on the internet and ‎playing
games
 on a gaming console, between
boys
 and
girls
 in the UK aged 10-‎‎15. The (3)information is divided into
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 ranges. ‎(4)Overall,
boys
 and
girls
 spent (5)more time playing
games
 on consoles than ‎chatting, (6)around 68%,(7) against 62%.(8) Specifically, around 33% more
boys
 ‎were playing
games
 as(9) compared to
girls
. ‎
Boys
(10) playing
games
 for 1-3
hours
 were 35%,(11) whereas
girls
 in
this
 time ‎frame constituted 13%. Around 2% of
girls
 (12)were recorded playing for more ‎than 4
hours
,
instead
 of 10% of the
boys
. A higher (13)proportion of
girls
 played ‎
games
 for less than an hour than
boys
 (14)who liked to play for more (15)extended ‎periods. ‎ When (16)chatting on the Internet,
girls
 were recorded to be around 69%, and
boys
 ‎were around 55%.
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 (17)equal proportion of
boys
 (25%) was recorded under ‎chatting for less than an hour and 1-3
hours
. Around 3% and 8% of
boys
 and ‎
girls
 were recorded chatting for more than 4
hours
.
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