illustrates the results from a survey of visitors to four types of tourist ‎attractions

The table illustrates the percentage of
students
enrol in four different kinds of
schools
from 2000 to 2009. Overall, it is clear that the proportion of
students
attending specialist
schools
, grammar
schools
and voluntary-controlled
schools
decreased while
this
figure for community
schools
increased. In 2000, voluntary
schools
headed for the proportion of
students
, at 52% which is higher than the percentage of pupils enrolling in grammar
schools
(24%). 12% of
students
attending specialist
schools
and community
schools
for each. In 2009, the percentage of pupils going to voluntary-controlled
schools
declined dramatically to only 20%. Grammar
schools
and specialist
schools
also
saw a slight decrease, to 12% and 10% respectively.
In contrast
, 2009 witnessed a significant increase in student attendance in community
schools
, from 12% in 2000 to 58% in 2009.

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