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Many people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people believe this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others suggest it will cause stress in the home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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The development of the Internet and computer science enables employees to
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 from
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. In some
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’s view, working at
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 is beneficial whereas others find it stressful.
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 and explain my opinion that the pros and cons should be weighed according to the nature of the
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 and the character traits of the workers. One obvious advantage of working from
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 is that employees can spend more
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 on personal life as the
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 for commuting is saved.
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,
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 with children can take the
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 between 5 pm to 6 pm which was used for commuting to pick up their children and cook dinner. Another advantage is that working remotely enables a flexible schedule, which benefits the employees who do not want to stick to office hours.
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, night owls, who find themselves productive at night but sleepy in the morning, can start to
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 later in the day and finish later at night.
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, working away from the office can cause many problems.
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, working in an environment with excessive comfort can lead to low productivity, especially for those who are not self-disciplined. To resist taking naps could be very difficult for them since their bedrooms are their offices.
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, the
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 that requires much teamwork,
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 as product design and event planning, which is are very dependent on cooperation and communication, will be negatively affected if team members are separated at their own houses.
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 communication technology makes online meetings available, it is not as effective as face-to-face discussion. To conclude, working remotely brings many benefits to workers,
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 as saving
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 on commuting and having a flexible
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 schedule.
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,
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 mode
may not fit
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may not fit people lacking self-discipline either
may fit people lacking self-discipline neither
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people
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 lacking self-discipline neither
people
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 working on projects needing much teamwork.
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,
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 should carefully the nature of their
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 and their traits when choosing which place to
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 from.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Telecommuting
  • Flexi-time
  • Remote work
  • Work-life integration
  • Virtual collaboration
  • Self-discipline
  • Workspace
  • Burnout
  • Ergonomics
  • Time management
  • Distractions
  • Productivity
  • Commuting
  • Connectivity issues
  • Team dynamics
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