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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true is this statement? How far does color influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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Nowadays，many psychologists are intrigued by the phenomenon that
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 can somehow alter our feelings about the things around us.
Hence
，we should make good use of these
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 to benefit people. Despite the idea, there are still some suspicious about whether
this
 theory is worth
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However
, it seems to me that we can surely depend on them. To commence with , there are many examples to prove the effectiveness of
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. Some certain
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 can largely decrease the rate of accident. In other word ,
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 can keep us calm and safe when
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 comes. Traffic lights , one of the most familiar tools to all of us ,are designed with different
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 to indicate whether the roads are safe. For
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, we often interpret red as a sign of
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, orange as a sign of caution, and green as a meaning of safe. When these
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 change ,our feelings changed as well, and
this
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. The
next
 question is how we are going to use it to influence one 's health and the productivity of work. As some doctors suggest, blue can make us stay
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 when anxiety comes, which I believe is the reason
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why people like to go relax and take a walk beside the ocean. As for green ,a
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 that could increase a person's creativity and work efficiency
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would be a
briliant
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 solution to be suggested to workplaces to increase the employees' job performance. Overall, many cases in
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 now indicate the usefulness of
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, and we could possibly make the world a better place if we make
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good use of them .
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