Nowadays, heavy traffic congestion has become a challenging problem in many cities.In this esssay, i will discuss about the reason behind this problem and the possible solution for traffic congestion.

Nowadays, heavy
traffic
congestion
has become a challenging problem in many cities.In
this
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i
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will discuss
about
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the reason behind
this
problem and the possible solution for
traffic
congestion
. One of the major reasons is that the ownership of
vehicles
has increased in the past few years which leads to
soaring
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number of automobiles on
roads
. The
vehicles
are now twice many as in the past by the measure of the
government
.
Secondly
, in many cities, the infrastructure for public
transport
is not fully developed and it is not available for the entire day.
Thirdly
, many cities around the world are not built with proper planning and
also
there are narrow
roads
which obstruct
people
from commuting. I personally think that free public
transport
is certainly a great idea, but it is not
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way to ease
traffic
congestion
. It is true that round the clock free public
transport
can reduce the occurrence of
traffic
congestion
because in most cases
traffic
issues are caused by the presence of a large number of private
vehicles
on the road. If public
transport
services are provided free of cost and their frequency is increased, few
people
will want to drive their personal
vehicles
.
This
will theoretically reduce the number of cars on the
roads
and ease
traffic
congestion
. On the flip side,
,
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when there are too many takers for
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free public
transport
, buses and trains will become overcrowded.
This
will make the journey uncomfortable and many
people
will have to stand all the way.
As a result
, affluent commuters will choose not to use public
transport
.
Instead
, they will drive their own car to work and the
traffic
situation will get worse again.
That is
why certain measures should be taken to deal with
this
situation.
Firstly
,
government
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should increase the quality of public
transport
by providing frequent services
such
as improving the frequency and reliability of buses and trains.If
people
can ride comfortably on a bus or a train and still reach their destination on time, they will definitely consider that option.
In addition
to
this
, fares of
government
transportation should
also
be reduced in order to promote it. Another measure is to construct wide
roads
and bridges. so that
traffic
can move smoothly during peak hours.
Furthermore
, separate cycle lanes should be constructed and
people
should be encouraged to ride bicycles.
Finally
,major city centres or crowded places of the city must be declared
car free
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and fine should be imposed on those who do not follow the rules. To sum up, solving the
traffic
congestion
problem is one of the biggest
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for the
government
.
However
, by developing the public transporting system and making the rules strictly,
i
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believe that the
traffic
congestion
will be reduced to
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certain extent.
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