In some schools and universities, girl tend to choose art subjects(e.g literature) and boys tend to choose science subjects(e.g physics).Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree?

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reveals that in some schools and universities, female students tend to take art subjects while male students tend to take science subjects. In my opinion, the reason behind

this

males

like to think more rationally than

females

in the case of studying.

However

this

tendency should be changed to ensure fairness in

the

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society. To initialize, there are several studies

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that

females

would like to think emotionally while

males

like to think rationally. As an example, when I was in college, I found out that boys surrounding me prefer mystery dramas on Netflix over romantic ones. Girls are in

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opposite position, they

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series

such

as Gossip Girls more than historical or mystery ones which are in boys' favour.

Additionally

, during a relationship,

males

tend to dissolve arguments by ration but

females

would like to solve them by emotion.

Last

but not least, the whole situation could just be people's stereotype. I've met quite a few

females

that achieve great

acdemic

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academic

success in some

sciencific

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scientific

courses in post-secondary institutions, they were as good as those

males

Moreover

, if we kept

this

stereotype in our mind, it could empower sexual bias in

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market. To be

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, technology employers would hire more

males

since they thought

males

are more suitable than

females

. Employers in

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industry would hire more

females

vice versa. In a nutshell, people had

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for sexual fairness

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a long period of time. The idea of

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specific sex should choose a specific area to study is unacceptable today. It is a freedom for anyone to choose any subject that they have interests with.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Gender roles
Stereotypes
Societal norms
Bias
Influence
Role models
Peers
Expectations
Inclination
Aptitude
Preferences
Competitive/Collaborative environment
Educational system
Subject choice
Disparity
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In some schools and universities, girl tend to choose art subjects(e.g literature) and boys tend to choose science subjects(e.g physics).Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree?

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