In some schools and universities, girl tend to choose art subjects(e.g literature) and boys tend to choose science subjects(e.g physics).Why do you think this is so? Should this tendency be changed? Do you agree or disagree?

An interesting
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discolouration
reveals that in some schools and universities, female students tend to take art subjects while male students tend to take science subjects. In my opinion, the reason behind
this
is
males
like to think more rationally than
females
in the case of studying.
However
,
this
tendency should be changed to ensure fairness in
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society. To initialize, there are several studies
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that
females
would like to think emotionally while
males
like to think rationally. As an example, when I was in college, I found out that boys surrounding me prefer mystery dramas on Netflix over romantic ones. Girls are in
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opposite position, they
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series
such
as Gossip Girls more than historical or mystery ones which are in boys' favour.
Additionally
, during a relationship,
males
tend to dissolve arguments by ration but
females
would like to solve them by emotion.
Last
but not least, the whole situation could just be people's stereotype. I've met quite a few
females
that achieve great
acdemic
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academic
success in some
sciencific
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scientific
courses in post-secondary institutions, they were as good as those
males
.
Moreover
, if we kept
this
stereotype in our mind, it could empower sexual bias in
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market. To be
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, technology employers would hire more
males
since they thought
males
are more suitable than
females
. Employers in
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industry would hire more
females
vice versa. In a nutshell, people had
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for sexual fairness
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a long period of time. The idea of
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specific sex should choose a specific area to study is unacceptable today. It is a freedom for anyone to choose any subject that they have interests with.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gender roles
  • Stereotypes
  • Societal norms
  • Bias
  • Influence
  • Role models
  • Peers
  • Expectations
  • Inclination
  • Aptitude
  • Preferences
  • Competitive/Collaborative environment
  • Educational system
  • Subject choice
  • Disparity
  • Encouragement
  • Inherent abilities
  • Career prospects
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