Researches has shown that spending much less time in office can reduce the use of energy for example electricity gas . Thus some companies close for days or a week. Do the advantages of this development outweighs the disadvantages.

In the contemporary era, there is an argument over an issue that researchers have told that any

energy

can be saved if the spending time is limited in any working field. So , certain organizations shut down for days or a week . Despite

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having certain merits of

this

trend ,

demirits

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demerits

clearly outweigh its advantages. On one hand , any nation would face economic loss if any working field remains close. To elaborate it, if companies remain shut down for some days or a week , peoples will face a salary problem they

dont

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don't

have enough money to spend on various commodities and

this

paves the way to decrease in GDP rate of any country. Any nation will never become successful unless there is an opening of all organizations.

For example

, the headline in 'Moscow Time ' revealed that in Japan every Saturday or Sunday markets were closed, which leads to the loss of economic status.

Hence

,

this

step has a negative impact on a country.

On the other hand

, in

this

,way we can save electricity or any other

energy

consumption.

In other words

, there is no one to use

energy

because all firms were close or allocating less time in office . Since it is extremely difficult to generate any

energy

, the government should adopt

this

policy to reduce the intake of any renewable energies.

For instance

, in, Britain there is a law that offices or working fields open only from Monday to Friday and there is two

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off.

Although

in

this

way we saved

the

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small percentage of

energy

, the disadvantages of it can not be neglected. To conclude,

eventhough

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even though

there is

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in the intake of

energy

by

this

method , demerits of

this

clearly surpasses its merits . it is predicted that in future there will never

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closed