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You have made a reservation in a hotel for a business trip for you and your colleagues. However, you need to make some changes to your booking. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter give details of your current booking explain what changes you need to make and why ask the manager to make some special arrangements for your business meetings

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Dear sir I am writing
this
 letter to request you to make some changes
in
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 our booking. I booked two rooms and a small hall for our meeting on 23rd July. My boss changes
date
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 of
a
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the
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 meeting. Now, we are 10 colleagues and my boss will come on 19th July
instead
 of 22nd
july
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July
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. We will stay there for 3 days. Please
also
 arrange a taxi for us to visit some famous places after
meeting
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.
Moreover
, I request you to arrange a conference hall for 30 people and a Mike, a projector and a better quality sound system. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon. Yours faithfully Anna
Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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