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Some systems require students to specialize in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school? What are the benefits of two education systems and what is better?

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The given chart
illustratws
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illustrates
 information about UK
immigration
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 including
immigration
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 and
emigration
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 between 1999 and 2008. It is clear that the figures for both
immigration
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 and
emigration
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 rose overall the period shown,
b ut
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but
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 the trend of
immigration
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 was much higher. Though, net migration ended at just a little over than the
beggining
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beginning
 year. In 1999,
immigration
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 started with 450,000
people
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 who came to live in the UK, but the figures for
emigration
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 was just about 300,000
people
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.
Then
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 number for
immigration
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 soared to just under 600,000 in 2004, and
then
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 it stayed at that amount with some fluctuations till 2008. Meanwhile, the
patern
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pattern
 of
emigration
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 majorly climbed in 2006,
at
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to
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 400,000
people
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, where the net migration reduced, but
then
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 sharply plummeted to 350,000 in 2007, followed by
the
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a
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 dramatic escalation in the
next
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 year
till
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 420,000
people
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. Regarding the net migration, it started with 160,000
people
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 that remained almost unchanged till 2003;
however
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, in 2004 and 2007, it escalated till 250,000 persons, before dwindling down to its
beggining
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beginning
 numbers (160,000).
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