As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?

In
this
contemporary
world
, a plethora of essential
goods
are
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being exported and imported from multiple countries and companies. There are two benefits of having trade like
pleasure
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of exotic materials and
boost
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a boost
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to online businesses
however
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,drawbacks outweigh the
advantageous
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. To commence with,
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amount of vegetables and foreign utilities are in demand since people tend to follow
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western
wesetern
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pattern of lifestyle now.
Although
there are many local farms and shops available mass population is driving towards imported
goods
as they have been
labeled
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labelled
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as
high quality
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products
.
For example
, while exotic veggies
such
as
zucini
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zucchini
,lettuce and avocado are not Indian
breed
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,they have been marked as
much
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healthier choice than our own local farm vegetables.
This
trading culture has
also
given
boost
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to online businesses and many companies are getting benefit from
globalization
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the globalization
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of their
products
. For an instance, Japan's Matcha green tea is not only restricted to
own
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nation rather became
supuerfood
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superfood
of
whole
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world
.
Therefore
, a plentiful of daily necessities being traded is much more beneficial for society as well as for
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organization.
On the other hand
, There are
disadvantageous
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disadvantages
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because the citizens are giving less value to local
goods
and
market
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capatalism
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capitalism
of these are getting reduced day by day . netizens
likes
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to broadcast that
by
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choosing
foreign
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a foreign
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brand of oil or grain showcase a status
hence
, use of the local
products
has been reduced. For a start , Many
indians
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have switched oil choices from mustard or rice bran to olive since
its
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it's
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more healthy than
former
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the former
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. There
are
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also
downfall in
economy
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the economy
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in country specifically less revenue gets generated from national
businnesses
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businesses
. To illustrate America consume much more foreign brands than
entire
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world
hence
,
economic
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budget and funds have
became
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weaken and couldn't afford
medical
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for all like basic
necessesity
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necessity
.The demerits of consumption of international
goods
and
products
are immense since it
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effects
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affects
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one nation's economic growth. To conclude,International business and globalization create opportunities for organizations in terms of product trade but it is not important if
neighborhood
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items are getting ignored and
in
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loss
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the loss
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.
Financial
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growth of
the
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most
of
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third
world
countries depend on locally produced daily
ammenities
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amenities
by introducing foreign culture in
this
field can create loss to society.
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