You have paid for a cricket course at a Sports Club, but due to a medical reason cannot complete the entire course. Write a letter to the course director. In your letter, explain your interest in the course describe your problems find out if a refund is possible

Dear Sir, I have always been a fan of
sports
. I had booked my cricket training sessions at your
sports
club for 5th December 2020 and my sessions were about to start from the 25th of January 2021. As you are aware that I have been a regular visitor of your
sports
club and have undertaken many
sports
activities. Yesterday while returning from the office I had severe knee pain due to which had visited our family doctor. I was informed by my doctor that I have sevier joint dislocation due to which I will have to take complete bed rest for seven months and avoid any physical activities. Considering my medical condition I will not be able to start training in your upcoming batch. I fear that I will have to cancel my plans of undertaking cricket coaching at your coaching institute. I am aware that It is against your regular practice to provide a refund to
noncontinuers
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. But, Please consider my medical condition and grant me a refund for my coaching. Hope you will understand my condition and do the needful for refunds. Thanks and regards, Nirav Dave

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