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Completing University education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#university #education #job #hand #people #skills
Nowadays, more students attitudes are to do a gap year after
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secondary
school
. They believe that they need to gain
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soft
skills
 rather than
theoratical
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theoretical
 studies. I strongly appreciate
this
 approach but with respect
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 importance of
school
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 degree.
This
 essay will discuss both views. On one hand, education is essential to expand our knowledge and solidify information. Universities give us a chance to parallel
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what we learn and how to apply it.
For example
, in pharmacy
school
 learner can't understand the theory parts without
practicing
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 inside the laboratory.
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 students cannot enhance these abilities in that field without applications.
Hence
, they need to use college
rescources
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resources
 to develop these
skills
 to be trusted pharmacist.
On the other hand
, many people argue against
this
 approach and trust that daily training for any soft
skills
 can help them to master it.
For instance
, to work as part
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sales
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 team, your negotiation
skills
 can help you to get the best deal and it is much important
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 your knowledge
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close the deal .
In addition
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 your daily practice to
this
 skill will improve your business and increase the profits. In conclusion, I think both views are worth and completing each other.
Although
 your personal abilities
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 essential and it can help you in your career ,
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 degree is the best choice to be
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 person. Knowledge and experience are part and parcel
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success
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 business.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • theoretical knowledge
  • specialized training
  • networking
  • baseline requirement
  • financial burden
  • hands-on experience
  • practical skills
  • soft skills
  • dynamic job market
  • entrepreneur
  • formal education
  • portfolio
  • hybrid approach
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