Completing University education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Nowadays, more students attitudes are to do a gap year after

the

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secondary

school

. They believe that they need to gain

a

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soft

skills

rather than

theoratical

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theoretical

studies. I strongly appreciate

this

approach but with respect

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importance of

school

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a school

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degree.

This

essay will discuss both views. On one hand, education is essential to expand our knowledge and solidify information. Universities give us a chance to parallel

between

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what we learn and how to apply it.

For example

, in pharmacy

school

learner can't understand the theory parts without

practicing

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inside the laboratory.

Also

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students cannot enhance these abilities in that field without applications.

Hence

, they need to use college

rescources

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resources

to develop these

skills

to be trusted pharmacist.

On the other hand

, many people argue against

this

approach and trust that daily training for any soft

skills

can help them to master it.

For instance

, to work as part

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sales

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team, your negotiation

skills

can help you to get the best deal and it is much important

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your knowledge

to

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close the deal .

In addition

to

that

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your daily practice to

this

skill will improve your business and increase the profits. In conclusion, I think both views are worth and completing each other.

Although

your personal abilities

is

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essential and it can help you in your career ,

school

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a school

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degree is the best choice to be

trustworthy

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person. Knowledge and experience are part and parcel

for

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of

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the success

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success

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business.