Your friend has booked a holiday for both of you. However, you are not happy with the hotel arrangements and want to change them. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter, mention: How excited you are for this holiday with him/her Why are you not happy with the hotel? Which alternatives would you prefer?

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I am excited awaiting our holidays. I remember the

last

meeting when you told me about your plans for a trip with me and

really

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surprised with your coordination and planning ability. When I received your call, I was overwhelmed with joy.

Moreover

, being an adventure enthusiast, it was my long-time dream to visit Kullu-Manali.

However

, I am extremely thankful to you for choosing

such

a wonderful place. I received the travel document sent by you through the mail.

therefore

, we are staying there for 6 nights and 1 day.

on the contrary

, sorry to say, I'm not happy with the lodging you have booked for us. I wanted to have a room with a balcony having a Mountain view plus dining.

Also

, I prefer the tavern should be in equal/almost near distance from our destination’s places.

hence

, without wasting time we can explore the whole of Himachal Pradesh.

Furthermore

, while checking with one of my friends, the hotel which you booked has several adverse reviews and is far from our destination spots. I have searched online for more information and found a hotel named Sterling Manali. More than a hotel, it is a resort.

Thus

, we can have a fun time together by playing games and swimming indoor pools. They have their own spa facilities, which will help us to relax from our tiring day roams.

In addition

, the most beautiful part is, it

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resort area with views of the Himalayas. Please consider my suggestion and change the plans apply

accordingly

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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12Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

253 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

It is generally believed that the internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give more financial support to local film industries?

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Traffic and housing problems could be solved by moving large companies, factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What are the main causes? How can we deal with this problem?