Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

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part of modern society. The
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is flooded with easy to access
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an important utility used by
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convenience is a big advantage, there are
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to the
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students
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ability to study.
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, some people argue whether
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access should be restricted for educational purposes. So what are these
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? and do these
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outweigh the upsides? One big downside of the
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is the increased risk of getting distracted. Personally, when I am doing educational
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I get often distracted by the many features the
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provides. Thereby, I often surf to my social media pages or go watch online videos, even though I have more
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school work to do.
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be seen as an advantage, since the
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can provide a space for
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in which they can relax after an intensive learning session.
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may help to keep the student mentally strong and potentially decrease stress. Another downside may be that the
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makes it too easy for
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to find their required
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. Before the
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existed was expected of
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to get their
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out of books. Currently, everything a student needs can be found
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key strokes
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convenience may neglect the
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ability to do “
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, we are overflooded with
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it may be appropriate to have a system in place that makes doing
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easier. Finding papers you require for your
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into a library is much more challenging than finding them on the
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, which saves a lot of time during
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busy modern time. Another big advantage of the
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connectivity. Many
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groups are formed onto the
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, which
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research
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can be shared globally, which improves global
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and development. And
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,
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are much better connected to their professors. In summary,
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may be distractive and too convenient for
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, it provides a solid foundation
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students
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can rely
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to learn. The
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is an inevitable part of modern society and we can not live without it. Thereby, in my opinion, the best way to learn is via the
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, I do not advocate the statement that the
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should be restricted for educational use, since the benefits far outweigh the
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