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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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Nowadays we come across wide usage of solar
energy
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 for households across the globe. As far as I am aware of the topic there are several things that influence
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 tendency regarding advantages and disadvantages. I will explain my view in
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 essay. Proponents of solar
energy
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 argue it is a waste and pollution-free source. Examples of
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 abound. Solar
energy
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 systems do not pollute the environment, people depend less on fossil fuels,
it
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and it
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 does not affect climate change.
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, once a household
located
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 in a sunny area most of the year it does not need any additional communications with the main
energy
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 plant, so additional maintenance materials and machinery are not needed.
Additional
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An additional
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 feature of the household solar system is that excess
energy
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 can be shared with a neighbourhood or a community for common purposes.
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 production of solar systems
associated
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 with pollution. Manufacturing solar
pannels
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panels
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 realises some chemicals with lead to a greenhouse effect. Another cone is the price of
panels
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the panels
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itself
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themselves
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.
Also
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, solar
energy
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 production is
dependant
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 on weather and its storage is expensive. One more considerable disadvantage is that
system
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the system
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 needs a lot of space. In conclusion, development of new technologies and increasing knowledge about our habitat
scientist
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scientists
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 and engineers search for
the
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apply
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ways to minimize costs and pollution effects. I believe, that one day solar systems will be available to most households in a sunny area and
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 will help to slow down the greenhouse effect.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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