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Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which do you think is a better educational system?

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Nowadays there are schools
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program
 is exclusively designed for student from age 15 while their friends just follow the general educational system. In my opinion, the former system could motivate well the talented student while the latter one allows teenagers to equip themselves
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 of various fields of life.
Therefore
, it is necessary to parallelly operate two
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 while
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category
 gifted student depending on their potential and need.
To begin
 with, a specialization in
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the academic
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 curriculum allows gifted
students
 to discover and develop their
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potential
. Indeed,
such
 early investment permits
highschoolers
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focus
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 on their
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 subjects, carry out
indepth
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in-depth
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 research
instead
 of wasting time on irrelevant fields. In
such
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 pedagogy environment,
students
 are surrounded by those who share
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 interest and
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supportive
supporting
 qualified teachers. As the result, those
students
 could quickly become experts
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 their field and have significant contributions to global development.
However
, learning all materials in
general
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 educational institution assists
students
 to prepare
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comprehensive
knowledges
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knowledge
pieces of knowledge
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 and skills in different materials.
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Because
 of the opportunities to learn both scientific subjects and social
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sciences
such
 as
litterature
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literature
 and national history,
students
 could utilize all those
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 and apply it to resolve problems in their life.
Consequently
, the special school destines the young who already figured out their ability and have the desire to develop it while general school 
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 by the rest of
students
, give them chances to discover their
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ability
 by trying different subject and their
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personal
 hobbies. In conclusion, both kinds of school program have their own
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aforementioned
 benefits and are suitable for each type of
students
.
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