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These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

#people #move #area #adults #development
The given bar chart compares the amount of
participation
 by youth in various eight sports activities in the year 1997 and 2017. It is apparent that overall
participation
 in gentle walking was more than other categories of sports. Meanwhile, cricket and basketball showed a complete reverse trend to each other in the given years. Gentle walking was the most preferred by adults in 1997, with 50,000 numbers, which remained the highest again after 20 years of period. In regards to football and hiking, both were equally famous, in 1997 and 2017, the number of people involved in these games was approximately 35,000, which reached almost 50,000 in 2017. In 1997 and 2017, jogging and Gym showed the same pattern in the graph for both years, with similar figures about 35,000 adults'
participation
. Meanwhile, adult participated with only 10,000 numbers in basketball, which skyrocketed dramatically in 2017, with just more than doubled.
However
, the pattern for cricket is reversed totally with that of basketball, where 25,000
participation
 was in 1997, which plummeted to just under 10,000 people in 2017.
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  • migration
  • globalization
  • socio-economic factors
  • traditional norms
  • cosmopolitan environment
  • brain drain
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