some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years,

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on the roads has increased at an unprecedented rate. While some feel that those who are living in rural

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must get motivated to

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to metropolitan

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in order to resolve road blockage and transport problems, I,

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notion for two main reasons. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will explain how

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situation.

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, the scarcity of city travel resources,

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buses and taxis, might

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if everyone living away will start moving towards it.

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, many

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usually have a fixed number of public buses to accommodate their locals.

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, if some short-sighted people motivates all the villagers to

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to urban

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the name of reduction in

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on the roads, they will actually

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the resources demand dramatically, resulting in

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of necessary transportation services.

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, they must remain at their places and look for alternates to solve

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problem.

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, the city dwellers might face more

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congestion on the junctions if all the rural people plan to stay in urban

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to overcome transportation issues.

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is because the amplification in public transport users will directly impact its demand, resulting in more buses on the streets.

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, the

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on the roads will dramatically

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. Take Russia,

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have faced

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when many outsiders came to these

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in 2014.

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, by learning from other

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, we must not let everyone

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to

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to resolve

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issues. In conclusion, I feel that people must not be motivated to

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to

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as a solution

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congestion and transport problem as

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trend can give rise to other severe problems,

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as lack of essential services, and

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in

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