some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years,

traffic

on the roads has increased at an unprecedented rate. While some feel that those who are living in rural

areas

must get motivated to

move

to metropolitan

areas

in order to resolve road blockage and transport problems, I,

however

, completely disagree with

this

notion for two main reasons. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will explain how

this

trend will amplify

this

situation.

Firstly

, the scarcity of city travel resources,

such

as

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buses and taxis, might

increase

if everyone living away will start moving towards it.

For example

, many

cities

usually have a fixed number of public buses to accommodate their locals.

However

, if some short-sighted people motivates all the villagers to

move

to urban

areas

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the name of reduction in

traffic

on the roads, they will actually

increase

the resources demand dramatically, resulting in

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of necessary transportation services.

Therefore

, they must remain at their places and look for alternates to solve

this

problem.

Additionally

, the city dwellers might face more

traffic

congestion on the junctions if all the rural people plan to stay in urban

areas

to overcome transportation issues.

This

is because the amplification in public transport users will directly impact its demand, resulting in more buses on the streets.

As a result

, the

traffic

on the roads will dramatically

increase

. Take Russia,

for example

, where many major

cities

have faced

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steep incline in

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traffic

when many outsiders came to these

cities

in 2014.

Hence

, by learning from other

cities

, we must not let everyone

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move

to

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areas

to resolve

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transportation

issues. In conclusion, I feel that people must not be motivated to

move

to

cities

as a solution

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traffic

congestion and transport problem as

this

trend can give rise to other severe problems,

such

as lack of essential services, and

increase

in

traffic

.