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Some people think that having a set retirement age (eg. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or desagree ? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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, followed by Other Asia Pacific and India with
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 for Asian people.
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 of global goods and
Europe
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population
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 for
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 of
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, lower than Rich Asia-Pacific region with 20
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