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Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all time, even on holidays. Does this development more advantages than disadvantages?

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Nowadays, many
employers
 to
prefer
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 remain in
contact
 with their employees during leisure
time
. In my opinion,is important to stay in touch with the
companies
 but
i
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 disagree whit
this
 trend because it can be more negative than positive for the personal lives of workers.
Firstly
, it is often thought
that is
 essential to keep in
contact
 with
employers
 out of working hours especially for overcome the other employees and in the future get a promotion.
However
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this
 is a bad thought because workers can have problems either unhealthy mental care or familiar issues.
For instance
, today with coronavirus, mana people have remote work and the most part of the day, they are connected even the weekend and in The News shows that mental problems have increased considerably.
Secondly
, it is considered by many that it
depends
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 the type of occupation if it is important to stay in touch in leisure
time
 because is different a doctor that works in a hospital to an engineer that it can be no essential work as in an emergency a doctor could save a life.
In addition
, in some ,
companies
 people that remain in
contact
 with
employers
 is considered
a
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committed person but there are
companies
 that free
time
 is crucial for being productive.
For example
, in mining holidays is the most important
time
 for rest because there are many risks of a fatal accident and is common that
employers
 not call the employees. In conclusion, I believe that stay in touch with
employers
 can have more disadvantages than advantages. Some issues can be unhealthy mental care, loss of familiar life and diminish productivity. Despite
of
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it mentioned keeping
contact
 with
companies
 in leisure
time
 it depends on the type of occupation.
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