Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion.

Some
parents
think that
children
should be sent to boarding
schools
because it brings huge benefits,
however
; other
parents
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is not an advisable decision. In
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paragraphs, I will discuss both
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views and reach a logical conclusion. On the one hand, those who support boarding
schools
claim that
students
seem to learn to live more independently
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place. These range from planning their daily life, to
learning
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about responsibility and discipline.
For instance
, boarding
students
live a more regimented life as
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solders
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. All daily routine is scheduled by
schools
. If they are allowed to watch TV, it is
also
closely regulated. Another argument is social aspect support that
children
give the possibility of living with
children
of the same age. In the same way,
students
develop their communication skills.
By contrast
, opponents of
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view point
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out that not all
parents
agree to send their
children
boarding
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schools
because it makes academic pressure
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and homesickness. Most
students
appear to lack emotional supports from their
parents
because they have
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away from their families. Examples can be seen in many pupils living in boarding
schools
, who could feel cut-off and stressed, resulting in their academic underperformances.
In addition
, with regular
schools
,
children
can leave the school and remove themselves from the pressure of excelling at studies,
however
; in boarding school, the pressure is constant.
As a result
, pupils lose their sleep and reduce their immune systems. In conclusion, it seems advisable that the decision to send boarding
schools
should be based on a child’s interest, independence, school circumstances, rather than on a general view that all
children
should send to boarding
schools
.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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