Some people think that famous people's support towards International aid organisations draws attention to problems, while others think that celebrities make the problem less important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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around the world

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to that

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creating more pubic eye on towards some

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others opine that these

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celebrities

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these

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views and I agree with a former opinion

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the following paragraphs. On the one hand, when

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serious trouble

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very soon. Many help and donate money for their

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actor or actress

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some

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help to solve any global matter when they are being

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actress Mrs Priyanka Chopra was an

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India project

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many fans and

supoortors

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supporters

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were

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helped

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to

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that project

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by

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financially and personally in order to that project

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successful.

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immediately

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invite

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any

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cinema

celebrities

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which indeed will get

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public eye on it.

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celebrities

' support should be needed.

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their

favourite

folks

instead

of

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the particular

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actors are being

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ambassdor

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ambassador

. The fame might be reduced the problem's

attention

and seriousness.

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about any serious trouble,

people

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their

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way of speech and how he dressed

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the problem.

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people

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any

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issue

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of

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the problem by the population.

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although

celebrities

can support

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the

issue

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more

attention

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all folks, the population can be distracted by

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celebrities

instead

of

adressing

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addressing

the problems.

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with

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the

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famous

people

can be supported

to

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the

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serious troubles by

attention

when they are being

an

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ambassdors

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ambassador

ambassadors

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