You rent an apartment. you want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. write a letter to your landlord. In your letter say what you like about the apartment describe the repairs that need to be made. explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life.

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Dear Mr Smith, I am Arti Upadhyay, a ranty of your sector 21 Panchkula house. I hope you and your family are doing well. I am writing

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letter to appreciate the home which you have provided us to rent on. At the outset, I am very grateful to you that you had never interrupted for anything since we had been living here for 3 years. I like

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apartment because it is quite spacious and particularly the breathtaking view of mountains from our roof. Everything is at our near approach

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as shopping

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, shops of grocery.

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, we have never faced any inconvenience while living here except the tomb which is placed above our dining area. In the rainy season water spill out from its edge and made our room so messy as well as damaging our sofa. So it

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desperate need of a little repairment.

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, kindly send a worker to recuperate the leaking edges of the tom. It would be very appreciated if you send them within 2 days because as you know that monsoon is on its way. The repair will definitely enhance our convenience to live here. For any

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information , please feel free to contact me on the below mentioned mobile number. Looking forward to your immediate action. With Regards. Arti Upadhyay 123456789

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

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9 paragraphs

222 words

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