The air pollution is becoming serious problem it is solely responsibility of our governments to reduce air pollution. Do you agree or disagree?

It is true that over the
last
decade
air
has become
more
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dirtier and It is commonly asserted that the only
government
must tackle
this
issue
air
pollution
. I personally believe that there is no strong evidence to justify
this
view.
First
and most obviously, all over the world increasing the number of cars and low-cost airlines has contributed
for
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air
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environment. One of the big reasons
of
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air
pollution
is car’s engine and fridges that can have bad far-reaching consequences for
population
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. If
government
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is not find
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solution
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a solution
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for
this
problem,
air
can become dirtier and
population
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can suffer from
this
.
For
example
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if
government
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decreasing prohibit produce manufacturing can solve
this
problem.
Additionally
,
use
chemical in agriculture
such
as pesticides and insecticides
also
using chemical
products
cause indoor
air
pollution
. If
government
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do not let farmers
use
harmful chemical pesticides, can observe dramatic changes and maintain our fresh
air
.
for example
, finding new beneficial
products
instead
of chemical
products
and insist people
to
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use
these
products
also
can indicate that we are conserving our valuable
air
. To conclude, whilst if the
government
to claim all people not to
use
harmful
products
for
air
pollution
and finds new ways and
products
, problems with
air
pollution
may decrease. I absolutely agree that the only
government
can solve
air
pollution
.
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