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Rich countries should not employ skilled labor from poor countries, as poor countries need the workers more. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • brain drain
  • economic development
  • skilled labor
  • annexation of talent
  • public services
  • investment in training
  • ethical considerations
  • global equity
  • temporary migration
  • bilateral agreements
  • human resources
  • technological advancements
  • healthcare and education sectors
  • global inequalities
  • responsibility
  • migratory policies
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