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Today the high sales of popular consumer goods Reflects the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what do you agree or disagree

#sales #consumer #goods #power #society
Nowadays, many
good
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 are being bought by
the
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consumers are under the influence of advertisement rather than its necessity. I completely agree that
this
 is trend is increasing significantly
in
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now due to several marketing strategies used by the companies and unawareness
individuals
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 necessities.
Firstly
, many people seem to buy certain items, just because
of
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they have seen a promotion about
the
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 particular item. They often
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 identify the need
of
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 the same.
In other words
,
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consumer behaviour
have
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 changed due to the advertisement revolution.
Additionally
, some individuals are completely unaware of
what
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their needs.
For example
, many people when they shop they tend to pick particular items which they have seen or heard on a daily basis through media without analysing the need of it. Those individuals tend to spend their money
for
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unnecessary goods. To conclude, the sale of many popular items
is mostly depend
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up on
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 the go it has been advertised to reach people's minds than the real need of it. I believe that
this
 trend is growing compared to
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 days.
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