Some businesses find that their new employees lack basic interpersonal skills, such as cooperative skills. What are the causes and suggest some possible solutions.

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will be damaged if workers have not enough personal skills. In
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some of the employees are chosen without any productive
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. Companies and business environment require some basic personal's skill
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are checked by several interviews. These interviews can reveal some of the
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of persons and it can prevent some possible side effects in the future.
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their resume is great a way to check their performance in
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. some of the people who have negative behaviour in the work environment change their jobs a lot and it can be easily
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if their resume is checked perfectly. There are several ways in order to avoid these problems.
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they can learn more about their behaviour and it leads them to choose a productive person. It is clear that while they are asked by some experts
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, a suitable individual can be chosen easily. In conclusion,
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some people may have great performance in businesses ,except their career resume, some of their personalities must be checked by experts to avoid some possible risks in the future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • interpersonal skills
  • cooperative skills
  • face-to-face interaction
  • digital communication
  • non-verbal cues
  • active listening
  • education system
  • technical knowledge
  • soft skills
  • remote work
  • work environment
  • comprehensive training programs
  • workshops
  • teamwork
  • role-playing scenarios
  • open communication
  • collaborative efforts
  • educational institutions
  • curriculums
  • hybrid work models
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