Due to increase use of aeroplane, air pollution is increasing more and more airports are constructed. Some people say that government should reduce air traffic by taxing it heavily. Do you agree or disagree?

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Airways are the modern

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for

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to move from one place to another as it reduces time, money and energy. Certain

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argue that airway transport

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causing more air

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just the predominant cause of air

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were forced to use roadways for moving

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imagine the cost of fuel and time wasted towards that process.

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would lead to the usage of airways only by elite

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which would not be a great idea. Another reason why I disagree is

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is a problem we need to resort to

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in which we could curb the

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on airfare.

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government

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the research of

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or electric fuel which would actually save the environment as well as the time and energy of the

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, the modern

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of transport is causing some

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would eventually put a hole in

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