It is true that nowadays there are dramatic changes
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virtual entertainment
devices
. , but some
people
believe that
this
phenomenon can bring several negative impacts on individuals and
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society. I personally believe that there is no evidence to justify
this
view.
First
and obviously,
although
it may be beneficial, entertainment on
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devices
can bring about several negative impacts. Video games are additive so many young
people
these days spend too much
time
on their
devices
and
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isolate themselves from others.
This
lack of face-to-face interaction not only hurts many
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relationships but
also
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of mental health issues among young
people
.
In
when
people
waste large amounts of
time
on virtual
devices
, they tend to be less physically active, which can in the end lead to problems with eyesight,
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and posture.
Furthermore
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over a long period of
time
makes
people
vulnerable to metabolic diseases
such
as obesity, which cause
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deterioration of health.
Secondly
,
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of
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devices
,
people
suffer from
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of stress,
people
spend a lot of
time
in front of virtual
devices
and it is harmful from different sides.
For example
, spend
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amount of
time
in front of virtual games, we lose our precious
time
also
it profound on our
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and memory.
In conclusion, society already used to gadgets, handheld
devices
which harmful as explained previously.
Although
the accessibility of entertainment on portable
devices
can result in many health risks, they can
also
be effective stress relievers for numerous
people
, and encourage the networking of like-minded individuals across the globe