Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued issue whether the parents should motivate to their's offspring participate in social activities in their spare time or they learn self-development on their own.

This

essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

To begin

with, the guardians should motivate social activities whom their offspring will do in their spare time because by

this

moment they can contribute to society and interact with others.

For example

, these days, many volunteer charity has involved a child to social work

such

as visiting an orphanage and houseless people

consequently

, they will help to them when they are adult.

Moreover

,

this

is the best way to know about the value of life and

this

can stimulate a helping tendency

as a result

, many people can get more benefits.

Hence

,

this

trend certainly gives more benefits to society as well as children.

Conversely

, some parents believe that their babies can do work themselves in their own interest and self-development.

For example

, many online applications can help to achieve single improvements through many tasks

consequently

, they might be learnt many things from themselves than group activities. To be more precise,

this

trend can lead to developing many technical and academic skills.

Therefore

, many accept

this

way. To conclude, certainly, the group participationsmightg be gotten more outcomes but a single performance and time spending can give more results to the children.

However

, in my opinion about

this

, the offspring should do the solo performance and self-improvements and

this

can give more advantages. I hope

this

trend is conducive for babies cognitive advancements.