Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants, other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible argument on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side your favor
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Some states have passed laws banning smoking in public areas.
However
, every country has not accepted this
law, until now. In this
essay, we will discuss two aspects. On the one hand, for countries that support health issues
it can be said that it reduces the physical and mental health, respiratory system, circulatory system, reproductive system, skin and eyes, and many types of cancer. Because smoke contains many hazardous substances Add a comma
issues,
and
it is easily released into the air at the same place nearby. Correct word choice
apply
For instance
: More than 8 million people are killed by cigarettes worldwide every year. Furthermore
, in case, people are sometimes needed to
in public places, if one individual Change preposition
apply
smoked
, others Wrong verb form
smokes
would
inhale cigarette gas, Verb problem
apply
it
means Correct pronoun usage
which
that
indirect smoking. It is possible, children and pregnant women will be affected by Correct word choice
apply
this
poison gas. Conversely
, those who oppose it say it is acceptable to smoke tobacco in a place where there is high congestion. Most of them explained that smoking has no noticeable effect and reduces tension and stress. Another reason is that the number of people visiting places, marked as “Non- smoking
areas” may decline, Correct your spelling
Non-smoking
as well as
decrease their incomes. It means that they say it limits the lives and surroundings of smokers. To conclude
, while
countries may vary in their anti-smoke-laws
, Correct your spelling
anti-smoke laws
it
must be enforced. It would be an improvement for people's health and can create a safe environment.Correct pronoun usage
they
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion