Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

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Mankind's lives have evolved irreversibly in many ways and became dependent
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computer technologies in all major platforms that he/she exists.
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the negative aspects of
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technology can not be overlooked,
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technology has brought our lives huge ease to a great extent. In my view, overall its merits
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its drawbacks. In terms of demerits of the era of
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thing that should be mentioned is the real human interaction, which has become redundant to some extent because of social media and other informative platforms. As the psychologists and psychiatrists
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, the monitors could not
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the need for face to face connection.
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, because of the other side effects of technology
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human life,
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need has increased even more for sustaining
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healthy psychology. The other major negative aspect is the increase in unemployment rates. Since many
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people had
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their jobs to
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software systems, it is much more
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for one to land a job. Regarding the positive sides of
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and the foremost aspect is the diminished
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inequality
of opportunities in education between social levels. Since the
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is just one click far away,
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much easier to learn regardless of the subject type
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as language, math, chemistry or history. The other merit that should have mentioned is the accessibility of the services
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as booking a hospital appointment or making transactions between bank accounts or reaching the
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last minute
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news about public services.
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one can reach public authorities by using platforms
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as
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and let them be aware of the
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updated problems and
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make solutions in the proper time. To conclude, when the reasons mentioned above
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thought, it can be easily seen some demerits could be diminished the way of using the
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systems. The benefits, which can not be achieved with some other platform,
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the drawbacks overall.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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