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In some countries, governments provide payments for unemployed people. How does this impact people? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Unemployment is a major problem that every nation face
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 to time. But the question here comes is how a country
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 its jobless people. Some nations provide
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help
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 providing funds to unemployed individual's bank account.
Therefore
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this
 scheme has influenced people in a positive way.
To begin
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government intervention has helped people to move out of poverty in bad times.
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 has impacted
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 several ways.
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, the payment done by the government is enough for them to have their two times meal a day.
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, the government money will allow them to focus on seeking a job stress-freely
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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