Nowadays consumer goods are cheaper to buy. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays,

consumption

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products are less expensive to purchase.

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essay will argue that the advantages of

this

outweight

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outweigh

the

drawnbacks

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drawbacks

.

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essay

wil

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will

first

demonstrate how low

price

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prices

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for

the

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consumer goods

allow

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people to enhance their life quality, followed by an analysis of the main disadvantage

that

is represent

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is represented

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by the

reduction

of the wage of workers. The main positive factor about the constant

reduction

of prices that we are seeing in the

last

period is the

possibily

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possibility

for families to buy all the necessary for live a nice

existency

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existence

.

However

the differences between peoples'

salary

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salaries

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are still big,

this

phenomenon has

permit

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the

reduction

of the disparity between rich and poor.

To

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instance, in the

past

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many parents could not afford things like new clothes, toys for their children and even certain types of food while, nowadays, they can easily buy these products. On the opposite side, many people sustain that

this

practice has led to a worsening of

employeers

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employers

employee

employees

conditions,

in particular

problems related to the wages. In fact, factory owners to be able to reduce goods prices are trying to lower their costs. For

this

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these

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reasons

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, many of them are moving their businesses

in

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poor

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the poor

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country

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countries

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because in

this

place there are

less

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fewer

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laws that regulate work conditions and thanks to the lack of rights for the workers they are able to offer a small salary with a

dramatically

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dramatical

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reduction

of costs.

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, nowadays a lot of firms move to India or Romania because they can maintain the same quality of products but spending

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half of the money that they would have spent in advanced countries. On balance, the price

reduction

of

consume

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goods produce bigger improvement in the life of people because allows to all to buy the necessary to live with dignity respect the negative impact that

this

situation generates regarding the worse work conditions for

employeers

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employees

employers

.