Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?

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worldwide.

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following paragraphs discuss what are the problems of increasing the

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of a criminal issue.

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the government and individuals. On the one hand, there are major

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rate

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reason is a lack of education in a poor country because

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they have

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an economy

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economy

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crisis and do not have any

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of

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money.

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country are facing an increasing unemployment

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many

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crimes

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young people

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as stealing money and drugs abuse. Another reason of that, some

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have divorce

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the child

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example, low

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bad friends and follow them in a wrong way of life.

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by best

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in different ways.

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with

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role, it should find

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and work with other modern countries to improve their economy

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a quality of education and

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, they should support the young people by

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them to participate in community services that

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helps to increase

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solution that the parents monitor their children and give them a warm and best family environment.

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, from the individual side takes more responsibility to keep their lives

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from the

crimes

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themselves working busy all the time. To conclude, the

crimes

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society and that why the government and individuals should act by

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problem in different ways.