You are going on holiday to a city overseas where your friend lives. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter Write about your plans Request information where to stay Ask about the best places to visit

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Dear Sam, Hope you’re doing great. I’m just writing about my trip. I can’t tell you how excited I’m to be coming to Toronto City. I’ve booked flights and arrive in two weeks from now at 8pm on August 6, which Is a Saturday. I’ve not much organised at the moment apart from few places like city tower and Niagara Falls. I hope I’d rather go there

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and explore more, with your help of course. As I’m from India and don’t have much knowledge about Toronto City, so it would be great if you give me a bit of insight about some places where I can stay and enjoy my holiday. I remember that it has been around 2 years when you moved to Canada, so you must have explored several famous areas.

Therefore

, I want you to recommend to me some exquisite sites to visit. Anyway, I will let you know when I get arrived and text me about the stuff that I’ve asked for. Catch you soon buddy. Best regards, Karam

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

174 words

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