Nowadays, in some countries around the world men and women are having children late in life. What are the reasons for this development? What are effects on society and family life?

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It has been noticed
accross
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across
the globe that women and men start expanding their families by having babies later in their
life
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two decades ago. In
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essay, I will discuss two possible reasons for
this
new development and what effects it might have on family
life
and society. In today's fast past
life
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especially
thanks to technology and social media, people tend to be more
career driven
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and they
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explore the world
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before they feel tied down at
home
with a
child
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These are two contributed factors why people decide to start a family later in
life
. Nowadays, in most households both parents are working,
where in
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comparision
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comparison
to the past the wife usually stayed at
home
.
Furthermore
, people are
also
more
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and want to climb the corporate ladder before they start a family. Another
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is that
traveling
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is much easier and more affordable
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ever before offering individuals more opportunities to explore the world. In a recent survey, from the magazine 'House and
Home
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woman
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women
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expressed that they want to break down the stigma that a woman's place is at
home
.
Therefore
, especially
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women
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want to achieve certain milestones in
life
before having babies. Starting a family later in
life
will have some effects not only
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the family
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but
also
on society.
Firstly
, if a couple decides to have a baby in their 40's
then
by the time their
child
or children is in their 20's. the parents will be on their way to become senior
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citizens
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this
will shorten their family quality time together.
Secondly
, if the parents
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take care of themselves anymore the
responsibilty
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responsibility
will fall on the
child
or children to look after them. In conclusion, in today's modern world it is not uncommon to start a family later in
life
. Despite the fact that it might have lead to negative effects later in
life
for the
child
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trend
  • developments
  • adulthood
  • education
  • career
  • financial stability
  • ready
  • start a family
  • assisted reproductive technologies
  • personal fulfillment
  • self-development
  • improved healthcare
  • life expectancies
  • cultural factors
  • religious factors
  • access
  • birth control methods
  • responsibilities
  • challenges
  • parenthood
  • influence
  • media
  • popular culture
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