Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themseleves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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and encourage them while others say that it is every student responsibility to think about their own Use synonyms
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and engage themselves in their favourite activity that Use synonyms
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parents
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last
year. They found that if Linking Words
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activities
and help them to motivate, those Use synonyms
children
perform very well in their academic and cultural Use synonyms
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whereas those are not interfering in their kid’s Use synonyms
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then
they performed very poorly. So that, parent motivation is an essential Linking Words
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the
goals and fulfil their dream? Change the word
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participation
in their interesting fields and work towards their targets, if required take additional help or guidance. Replace the word
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a student
then
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this
way, he can get his dream job and work in multi-national companies. Linking Words
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, candidates should be conscious about their tomorrow.
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