Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themseleves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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contemporary era,
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are worried about their
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future
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. Most people say that
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need to think about their
children
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activities
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and encourage them while others say that it is every student responsibility to think about their own
future
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and engage themselves in their favourite activity that
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them to achieve their
future
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goals. I strongly agree with the latter notion. In
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essay, I will discuss these in the
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Firstly
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,
parents
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should interfere in the
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life
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because
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this
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way, they know what their
children
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are doing in their
life
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? and encourage their
children
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to participate in cultural or any group
activities
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.
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, In the survey that conducted by the Ryan school
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the
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year. They found that if
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are looking
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at
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their child
activities
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and help them to motivate, those
children
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perform very well in their academic and cultural
activities
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whereas those are not interfering in their kid’s
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then
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they performed very poorly. So that, parent motivation is an essential
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think
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in every child
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.
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, pupils should be aware
about
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of
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their
future
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and think
what
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about what
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kinds of
activities
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helping them to achieve
the
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goals and fulfil their dream?
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,
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the student
a student
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student
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students
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should take
participation
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in their interesting fields and work towards their targets, if required take additional help or guidance.
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, if
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a student
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decided that he want to be a software engineer
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he picks the computer science subjects after his schooling. In
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way, he can get his dream job and work in multi-national companies.
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, candidates should be conscious about their tomorrow. In conclusion,
parents
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guidance and encouragement always be helpful for
children
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and motivate them
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of
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, pupils should
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take care about their tomorrow and think towards that direction. In my opinion, students should
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think
for
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their destiny, if required take others help. But
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children
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children
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should
first
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take a step ahead.
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