Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themseleves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In
this
contemporary era, parents
are worried about their children future
. Most people say that parents
need to think about their teenager activities
and encourage them while others say that it is every student responsibility to think about their own future
and engage themselves in their favourite activity that helps them to achieve their future
goals. I strongly agree with the latter notion. In this
essay, I will discuss these in the detail with examples.
Firstly
, parents
should interfere in the children life
because, in this
way, they know what their children are doing in their life
? and encourage their teenager to participate in cultural or any group activities
. For example
, In the survey that conducted by the Ryan school the last
year. They found that if parents
are looking at their child activities
and help them to motivate, those youngsters perform very well in their academic and cultural activities
whereas those are not interfering in their kid’s life
then
they performed very poorly. So that, parent motivation is an essential thing in every child life
.
Second
, pupils should be aware of their future
and think about what kinds of activities
helping them to achieve their goals and fulfil their dream? In addition
, students should take participate in their interesting fields and work towards their targets, if required take additional help or guidance. For instance
, if a student decided that he want to be a software engineer then
he picks the computer science subjects after his schooling. In this
way, he can get his dream job and work in multi-national companies. Therefore
, candidates should be conscious about their tomorrow.
In conclusion, parents
guidance and encouragement always be helpful for minors and motivate them instead
of this
, pupils should also
take care of their tomorrow and think in that direction. In my opinion, students should first
think about their destiny, if required take others help. But youngsters should first
take a step ahead.Submitted by abdheshv79 on
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