Some people think students should study the science of food and how to prepare it. Others think that school time should be used in learning important subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

It is believed that students ought to study the way food can be prepared and its science whereas others defend that their time in educational institutions

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to be used wisely with useful matters. In

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I will discuss both views and I will present my opinion towards the subject.

To begin

with, youngers go to

school

to learn about several subjects which are important for caring a healthy and

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life. Several teenagers are not well taught about nutrition neither at home nor in

school

, because their parents may not care about

this

topic and

that is

why

school

plays a fundamental role in their lives.

Additionally

, the lack of knowledge regarding

this

subject has brought about high levels of obesity which millennials are recently facing. For that reason, schools need to accurately cover

this

topic, because it is their responsibility to prepare young citizens to live properly and healthily.

On the other hand

, educational institutions need to focus on teaching technical subjects which are a fundamental knowledge to youngers lives.

In other words

, each grade has its own syllabus already defined by a national institution that regulates what needs to be taught

accordingly

with a person’s age and maturity. To illustrate, they are Math for 5th grade, Geography for 1st year and English for secondary

school

.

Consequently

, some parents are against innovative

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,

such

as nutrition, because they might affect the general learnt and may distract their infant from what really matters. They argue that it is a waste of time

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cookery classes

instead

of learning about national history. In conclusion, both sides have their own merits,

however

, I defend that

school

is a place where everything needs to be taught and well-explained to infants,

such

as cookery abilities and Maths. It is important to help teenagers handle well nutrition and food preparation

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because it is not a matter of cooking exclusively, but

also

keeping

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good health and how to live properly,

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they could develop irreversible chronic diseases.